What do you do after you write a short story?

It depends. If you're writing it, it's your decision.

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A bit of constructive criticism:

it is a good start to use fictional places in stories that are fiction (when it comes to places such as Canoga Park)

the way you are writing is all in the speakers pov you haven't really switched. so it's fine to keep this format

I would suggest not saying things like "come join me on the flashback..." as its unprofessional and makes the story feel less real and less immersive.

Overall it seems like an interesting read

It was in that moment she realized she was completely and utterly alone

• adair
• woodburn
• ambrose
• atwood
• carmona
• crawford
• sprouse
• skyes

idk thats pretty much all i can think of right now. id love to read it when its done though

"sometimes its not the people that change. its the mask that falls off"

For it to be YOUR story, you must think of your own characters etc, otherwise, it's not your story and you are not a writer.